Friday, August 13, 2021
quick write
I removing a time where my brother did the what and he survived it .he came back with no leg and he had no hand. hey I'm my head a pistol and a knife. he came back I wanna a our last person standing. he helps someone has own country shutting down. the next month he got rescued.
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Kia ora Mason, Great quick write. I can tell you thought about what the solider in the picture might have been through. Perhaps next time, you could use the text-to-speak on your chromebook to listen to your writing and check it makes sense. Good work.
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